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The DREAM ME sonnet by =Avatarone3:iconAvatarone3:



Oh me, hidden from the world in a courtyard of dreams,
the green of life springs forth anew,
the leaves twist and turn, open to its schemes,
waiting, watching, springing forth to say, 'adieu.'

My self proclaims the lie in the shock
with each growing, bursting spark of ember,
yet rushing downwards to its darkened prey as a hawk,
until its last hot breaths cease, calling to remember.

I see in the face of the girl I want to be,
a mere reflection of was, is, and destined?
Yet hope and dreams call beyond what to see
and gathering strength, show myself each lesson.

Until the springtime glass come again,
open a flower, a spark, my new self, commend.
©2009 =Avatarone3
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Author's Comments

Sonnet I had to write for school...
I was writing of my dream me (who I could be).

The first section (poetic vocab words escape me) is my dream me, as a tree in a courtyard. I reach up into the light, my leaves reach for my dreams, yet I'm hidden from view.

The second section is my dream me as a dying campfire. "rushing downwards to its darkened prey" is the fire's burning to the ground/dirt. My dreams can sometimes spark up the fire once more, before they give into death.

The third section is a mirror, in which I see my dream me, and my reflection tries to teach me lessons of life.

The fourth section is my resolution, where I wait for spring (tree's rebirth), a spark, and a glass, to open up for me once more...

hope you like, any questions?

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:iconcrazy4zuko:
Holy crap muffins that's awesome!! :D

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Aww.. thank you so much! :D

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And its funny how it`s the simple things in life that mean the most... so raise you glasses for a toast
to chicken fried, cold beer on a Friday night, a pair of jeans that fit just right, and the radio up!
Zac Brown Band
Seek to illuminate, not to shine.
:iconcrazy4zuko:
Of course, my inability to comprehend anything at the moment might make big words fascinating to me... ftw I just said a bunch of big words(:icontarddanceplz:)!

Actually I'm just really drowsy from not getting to bed... but the bit about long words being interesting is true. It's funny when I'm tired. I'm practically drunk but conscious of my actions...

lol I just realized there aren't any long words... ^^; wow I'm tired...


But this is really good nonetheless!! Sorry if that was confusing... wait it's only confusing to me... Imma go now before I fall asleep or say something further that actually doesn't make sense... :XD:

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:iconzukosember:
Amazing job! Ur details never cease to amaze meh!!!! aannnnnddd, my little words of advice: never give up ur dreams hun! Sometimes they may seem far away, but that only means u have an adventure ahead that'll lead ya to em!!!!!! Great job once again! :hug: Keep up the amazing work!

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Good morning Starshine, the earth says "hello"
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Hahh! you make me laugh! And I needed that! no, I'm like that a lot too, although people think I'm altogether crazy. But it's all good!
Thanks for the awesomness conversation!

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And its funny how it`s the simple things in life that mean the most... so raise you glasses for a toast
to chicken fried, cold beer on a Friday night, a pair of jeans that fit just right, and the radio up!
Zac Brown Band
Seek to illuminate, not to shine.
:iconavatarone3:
Aww! Thank you so so so much! I won't give up if you won't! thank you thank you thank you!

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And its funny how it`s the simple things in life that mean the most... so raise you glasses for a toast
to chicken fried, cold beer on a Friday night, a pair of jeans that fit just right, and the radio up!
Zac Brown Band
Seek to illuminate, not to shine.
:iconcrazy4zuko:
Oh and before I forget, can I color your wolf sketch? Well technically it would be wolves... but... too tired... -_-Zzz

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Base for my avatar: [link]
I believe in Jesus Christ my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it then copy n paste this in your signature
:iconavatarone3:
Oh, um, sure! If you'd like! just credit me! go to bed!

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And its funny how it`s the simple things in life that mean the most... so raise you glasses for a toast
to chicken fried, cold beer on a Friday night, a pair of jeans that fit just right, and the radio up!
Zac Brown Band
Seek to illuminate, not to shine.
:iconzukosember:
anytime hun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And trust meh hun, i aint never gunna give up!!!!!!!!! Not as long as God's on mah side! and urs too!!!!!!!!!!

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Good morning Starshine, the earth says "hello"

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